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Sunday, October 09, 2016
Sensory Details in Your Story by Connie Vines
Every writer knows how important sensory details are to a story.
Here is one way to keep track of those details that make your stories come alive for your readers.
Sight (the most utilized sense in writing; don’t forget the others!)
- flash of lights in the night sky
- deep blue of the ocean
- the roads had begun to glisten underneath headlights
- the sun was setting behind low, gray-blue storm clouds
- a heavenly hue to the layers of ice and snow accumulating on rooftops and tree limbs.
- her shadow shaky behind a slight flame stemming from a candle she carried
- sparks lit up the dusk of day
- a blinking red light from the truck’s turn-signal illuminated our darkened home
Sound
- The walls shook and vibrated like the tail of a rattle snake
- Ice crackled and pinged against the family room window
- Wind swirled around our beach house whistling loudly to a terrible tune
- The television buzzed as it shut off, and the furnace sighed one last time before the house
fell silent.
- The cracking of wood splitting punctuated each burst of fire like an exclamation point.
- the sounds of emergency sirens awakened the still roads
- the howling of wind and branches creaking under the weight of ice
Smell
- sweet aroma of baking corn bread
- cinnamon-scented candle
- pungent odor of smoke.
- salty beach air
- rotting leaves and crispness of air
Touch
- We sat still, huddled underneath the quilt
- Car tires gripped the ice with fearful intensity
- The power lines, heavy from the thickness of ice had snapped
- soft tufts of fur
- stick my toes in the warm and grainy sand
Taste
- ice-cold strawberries
- tall, frosted glass of sweet yet bitter lemonade
- salty chips
- juicy tartness of orange
- rancid butter
Think about your life experiences; good and bad.. The places you've lived. Your childhood.
See what you can do to add sensory details to your stories.
Happy Reading and Writing,
Connie
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Saturday, July 23, 2016
What Makes a Novel Memorable? #RR Blog Hop 7/23/16
Topic for July: What makes a novel memorable?
The best stories connect with readers on a
visceral level. They transport us to another time and place and put us in a
different “skin,” where we face challenges we may never know in life. And yet,
the commonality of the story problem draws us onward and, in solving it
vicariously through the protagonist, changes us.
Another feature of
a memorable story is characters that live off the page. One of the highest
compliments I’ve never received for my novel “Lynx”, Rodeo Romance came when
one reader told me she thought about my story constantly. She said that Lynx
and Rachel’s story seemed so real, so heart wrenching, and their love so very
enduring. She said that she was going
through a difficult time in her life and my story gave her hope. Hope.
Hope for someone during a desperate time—I felt blessed that she shared
her story. I was also humbled. It is moment such as this that I know just
how powerful worlds and stories are to our readers.
While I never sit
down at the keyboard and say, “I think I will write a powerful, life-changing
story today.” What I do, by nature, is
select a social issue for the core of my stories. Since my stories are character driven and
often told in the first person, the emotion has a natural flow.
How do you create
this type of engagement with your story?
Go beyond the five
senses. Your reader must feel your
character’s emotions. Your reader must
forget there is a world outside of your story.
Embrace idiosyncrasies. As teenagers everyone wanted to fit in, be one of the crowd. Your character isn’t like anyone else. Give him an unexpected, but believable trait. In “Here Today, Zombie Tomorrow”, 99-cents for the next week on Amazon.com, my heroine, a Zombie has a pet. Not a zombie pet. Not a dog, or a cat. She has a teddy bear hamster named Gertie.
Make them laugh. It doesn’t need to be
slap-stick. Just a little comic relief
when the reader least expects it to happen.
Make them cry.
Remember the scene in the movie classic, Romancing the Stone, where Joan
Wilder is crying when she writes the final scene in her novel? I find this is the key. If you are crying, your reader will be crying
too.
If you are writing a romance, make them fall in
love. Make the magic last. The first meeting, first kiss, the moment of
falling in love. These are the memories
our readers savor, wait for in our stories.
Don’t disappoint them.
As Emily Dickinson, said so well:
There is no frigate like a book
To take us lands away,
Nor any coursers like a page
Of prancing poetry.
This traverse may the poorest take
Without oppress of toll;
How frugal is the chariot
That bears a human soul!
There is no frigate like a book
To take us lands away,
Nor any coursers like a page
Of prancing poetry.
This traverse may the poorest take
Without oppress of toll;
How frugal is the chariot
That bears a human soul!
Thank you, once again, Rhobin for this month’s
topic.
Please visit the members of our RR blog hop today
and see what each one has posted.
Connie
Judith Copek http://lynx-sis.blogspot.com/
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.blogspot.ca/
Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea
Dr. Bob Rich http://wp.me/p3Xihq-I4
Victoria Chatham http://victoriachatham.blogspot.ca
Helena Fairfax http://helenafairfax.com/
Marci Baun http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/
Rachael Kosinski http://rachaelkosinski.weebly.com/
Connie Vines http://connievines.blogspot.com/
Rhobin Courtright http://www.rhobinleecourtright.com
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Sunday, March 06, 2016
Brede, Rodeo Romance, Book 2—Sunday Snippet #sundaysnip
This Sunday’s Snippet is from my Contemporary Romantic
Suspense novel, “Brede”.
“My head hurts,” she whispered. A
sharp, throbbing pain embedded itself in the center of her left temple. She touched her raw fingertips to the tender
area, and tried to grasp a fleeting memory. . .of what, she wasn’t
certain.
At that moment, a man leaned over
her. His eyes reminded her of the ocean;
soft blue water reflecting through frosted crystal—sad, lonely eyes.
The
warmth from the blankets seeped into her chilled body, but the sound of the
pounding rain sent terror crawling through her.
She bolted upright, her heart thumping so card she couldn’t catch her
breath.
“Lie
back down,” the man instructed. “You’ve had some sort of accident.”
Pain
lanced through her body and her head. Beneath
the wave of pain, she heard the concern in his deep voice, and pressed an
unsteady hand to her forehead. “Accident?” Her fear receded, but didn’t go away
completely. An accident explained the
sharp, pain embedded in her left temple and radiating down the side of her jaw,
but it didn’t explain what she was doing here.
Here? Where was she? And who was
this man standing over her?
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Remember "Brede" is on sale this month.
Remember "Brede" is on sale this month.
Happy Reading,
Connie
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Sunday, February 14, 2016
Sunday Snippet ~ Brede~ by Connie Vines #Sunday Snips
Welcome to Sunday Snips. This is a Blog Hop of sorts, a chance to sample a snippet of each participating author's work. Today I'm sharing a snippet from Book 2 of my Rodeo Romance Series, "Brede", published by Books We Love.
I hope you enjoy this Romantic Suspense story!
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Prologue
Audralynn Maddox heard her own soft cry, but the pain exploding inside her head made everything else surreal. distanced somehow by the realization that someone had made a mistake.
A terrible mistake.
He caught her wrists, pinning them behind her and shoved her, face first, against the van, "Nobody double crosses J.B., bitch. Nobody!"
His attack had come so unexpectedly that Audralynn hadn't seen his face. His voice didn't sound familiar, yet she delved into the depths of her subconscious, trying to pin a name to the voice. She jerked and heaved against his grip, trying to gain her freedom, but he was far too strong.
"I don't know any J.B.," she whimpered. She wanted to scream the words, but her head pounded. Tears of pain stung her eyes and ran down her cheeks.
He laughed. The hateful sound mocked her growing terror. Her pitiful struggles only increased his cruelty, but she dared not stop.
"Thought you could go back on the bargain, did you? We've been watching your place. Your friend didn't want to cooperate, either. Too bad she put up such a fight."
Vikki What did you do to Vikki?
He shoved her face against the door. "She didn't cooperate. Stupid bitch. I only wanted the photos."
The man's hot, rancid breath assaulted her senses as he grabbed her by the shoulders to still her struggles. " Now, you're a smart little piece," he hissed. Don't cause me any more trouble and maybe I'll let you go. Where'd you stash the photos?"
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Brede is avaiable at Amazon in ebook format for 99 cents!
www.amazon.com/Connie-Vines/e/B004C7W6PE
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I hope you enjoy this Romantic Suspense story!
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Prologue
Audralynn Maddox heard her own soft cry, but the pain exploding inside her head made everything else surreal. distanced somehow by the realization that someone had made a mistake.
A terrible mistake.
He caught her wrists, pinning them behind her and shoved her, face first, against the van, "Nobody double crosses J.B., bitch. Nobody!"
His attack had come so unexpectedly that Audralynn hadn't seen his face. His voice didn't sound familiar, yet she delved into the depths of her subconscious, trying to pin a name to the voice. She jerked and heaved against his grip, trying to gain her freedom, but he was far too strong.
"I don't know any J.B.," she whimpered. She wanted to scream the words, but her head pounded. Tears of pain stung her eyes and ran down her cheeks.
He laughed. The hateful sound mocked her growing terror. Her pitiful struggles only increased his cruelty, but she dared not stop.
"Thought you could go back on the bargain, did you? We've been watching your place. Your friend didn't want to cooperate, either. Too bad she put up such a fight."
Vikki What did you do to Vikki?
He shoved her face against the door. "She didn't cooperate. Stupid bitch. I only wanted the photos."
The man's hot, rancid breath assaulted her senses as he grabbed her by the shoulders to still her struggles. " Now, you're a smart little piece," he hissed. Don't cause me any more trouble and maybe I'll let you go. Where'd you stash the photos?"
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Brede is avaiable at Amazon in ebook format for 99 cents!
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Sunday, February 07, 2016
Sunday Snippets ~ Lynx ~ by Connie Vines ~ #SundaySnips
Welcome to Sunday Snippets
Sunday Snippets is a Blog Hop of sorts, a chance to sample a teaser of an author's work.
I'd like to share a snippet from"Lynx" Book 1 of my Rodeo Romance Series, published by Books We Love. Dust off your cowboy boots and two-step into a rip-roaring good time!
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Charlene hadn't told Rachel that she'd fixed her up with a cowboy, much less Lynx Maddox, the "Wild Cat" of the rodeo circuit. Rachel sighed. She should have known. After all, Charlene only dated men who wore boots and Stetson.
Rachel Scott cringed at the very thought even as her gaze took in the breadth of Lynx Maddox's chest, his broad shoulders, and dark green eyes that scanned her with blatant masculine approval.
Despite her stern efforts to control it, her heart pounded against her rib cage. She'd seen him sitting at the table with Charlene Davis and Dan Elder before he'd spotted her. Oh, she'd allowed herself to look when he'd walked he way--looking didn't hurt. Ad it was okay to dream--a little fantasy never harmed a woman. But that was it; that was where it ended. After watching her father die in the arena, Rachel had sworn she'd never have anything to do with another rodeo cowboy. She stopped her train of thoughts and managed to the cowboy a smile.
"Nice to meet you," she said, accepting his extended hand. She felt the strength in his warm callused fingers. Rachel tried to ignore a fluttering sensation low in her stomach. There was one thing she was certain of as he looked up at his piercing eyes and uncompromising jaw--men like him had trouble written all over them. And she doubted Lynx Maddox would prove to be an exception.
"Rachel, I'm glad you came tonight." His voice was soft as velvet and laced with a Texas drawl.
He smelled of woodsy masculine cologne and the sudden rise in her body temperature clued Rachel to the unexpected twist to this encounter--she was much too aware of the sexy cowboy. So aware, in fact, she had difficulty recalling her own name! She focused on the warmth of his hand against hers and she knew, although his grip was light, he was very strong. Nevertheless, his strength wasn't affecting her nearly as much as the power of his presence; it vibrated everywhere, even from the saw-dust covered floor beneath her feet.
His slow, lingering smile seemed to unravel what remained of her composure. For several seconds she seemed incapable of speech, or even movement.
"I hope you didn't mind meetin' us here," Lynx said, easily, oblivious to her inner turmoil.
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Lynx, is available at Amazon, iTunes, Barnes and Noble in ebook format and print, also by request at a bookstore near you.
(H.O.L.T. Medallion and Orange Rose Finalist, Award of Excellence and Fool for Love, Winner)
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Sunday, August 09, 2015
Sunday Snippets #8/9/2015 #Sunday Snips
I spent my Saturday in Brea, California with the members of my local chapter of Romance Writers of America socializing over lunch, congratulating the RITA winners and finalists and discussing the business of writing.
I thought I'd share a a bit about the topic of 'crafting my novels' in this week's topic.
Research
or Over-Research – So, Where Does a Connie Draw the Line?
Every writer knows even when writing a nonfiction
novel: making it up requires research.
Storytelling means that the mind of the writer need to research
never stops. Isaac Asimov once said he was writing every minute he was in the
shower; in the shower, he was only thinking about his writing. In the same way,
research for my novels has become a part of me.
Romantic Suspense requires its writers to be reliable
witnesses. Contemporary Romance requires its writers to pay special attention
to details which enhance the emotional connection. Biting humor/chick lit
requires the writers to take contemporary events and spin them off kilter. While young adult/tween fiction requires a
lighter touch-- with a connection to the teachable psyche and the future of
humanity.
Most writers try to strike a happy medium when
conducting research, leaving enough wiggle room with reality to spin a good
yarn. Yet research has a cumulative effect. Once you start, you don’t stop.
You can already guess where I fall on the research graph:
once I start, it’s difficult, if not impossible, for me to stop conducting my
research.
So, here are few of my research questions (Gumbo Ya Ya: an anthology for women who like romance Cajun): can a true gypsy (real medium/fortuneteller
type) foretell her own future? What does a television producer do during the course
of her day—when she’s key suspect in a murder investigation? What does it feel
like to be on a pirate ship during the 1600s? Does time travel hurt? Bachelor
Auction--what goes on during a Bachelor Auction? How does one concoct an accidental
love potion? And, lastly, from my next “Fun and Sassy Fantasy” series: do
gargoyles really know how to fly?
Remember research is not story. Trivial facts gathered
from a variety of experiences can change the course of a future narrative.
Growing up in a career naval family gave me an almost
inherent knowledge of the sea and maritime history. While residing in San
Diego, California I visited the “Star of India” (16th century
sailing vessel) moored at the harbor. My husband, being from Louisiana, made
Cajun country and New Orleans frequent vacation destinations, and gave me
‘instant atmosphere’ for my setting. While I reside within driving distance of
Hollywood, Universal Studios and the like, aside from a short internship in
theater makeup technique, I am not a ‘go-to-person’ in all things Hollywood.
What am I to do?
I went to a local Starbucks, ordered a tall Pikes
blend (1 Equal--yes I know it's bad for me, and a chaser of nonfat milk), selected a table by the window and plopped down
my iPad, pulled a chair near my table and conducted a Google search. Alas,
Google is not the Oracle of Delphi. My next step was to log on to the local
library Web site where I selected related research materials and reserved them
for front desk pickup. This I knew, would
not quench my search of knowledge. With
a heavy sign (knowing what weekday traffic was like) I decided to participate
in a SoCal tourist day at Universal Studio (tour and City Walk). I paid careful attention to all things
visible during the freeway drive, my impression of the back lot and studio
history. I also interviewed employees
and tour guides, and park visitors. Later, while grabbing a quick snack and the
“Hard Rock Café” I spied the red carpet being set-up for a movie premier. Yay, pay dirt! A few more questions,
observations, and a few interesting true stories (no names mentioned) told in
passing, and I was good to go.
Will everything I discovered end up in my anthology? Most likely not. Have I completed my research on the above
mentioned topics? Since my husband frequently
asks if my office is a satellite branch of the public library, I know if I’m
not researching this topic I will find another point of interest.
Reading isn’t a spectator event.
By reading you experience life.
The more knowledge you have, the better-equipped you are to tackle any
challenge you’ll ever face.
No matter know much stress you have at work, in your
personal relationships, or daily life, it all just slips away when you lose
yourself in a great story.
This is what I, and every writer I know, works to create for a reader--a cast of characters who become your friends, and a story that leaves you clambering for a sequel!
Happy Reading,
Connie
My fall release: BWL, Ltd,
(Books We Love).
Art work by Michelle Lee
Please visit the other authors' participating in the Sunday Snippets Blog Hop:
http://yesterdayrevistedhere.blogspot.com/ (Janet Waldron)
http://mizging.blogspot.com (Ginger Simpson)
http://triciamg.blogspot.com (Tricia McGil)
http://romancingscifi.blogspot.com/ (Vijaya Schartz)
http://yesterdayrevistedhere.blogspot.com/ (Janet Waldron)
http://mizging.blogspot.com (Ginger Simpson)
http://triciamg.blogspot.com (Tricia McGil)
http://romancingscifi.blogspot.com/ (Vijaya Schartz)
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Sunday, July 05, 2015
Sitting in the Shade of My Mimosa Tree by Connie Vines, Sunday Snippets #sundaysnips
“Someone
is sitting in the shade today because someone planted a tree a long time ago”. ~Warren Buffett
I find in the day-to-day living of our
super-charged lives, we, speaking of Americans collectively, often neglect to
give thanks for our multitude of blessings. I believe one of our greatest blessings—a
blessing that many have lived, sacrificed, and died to uphold is celebrated
this, and every, 4th of July.
We must remember those who planted the seeds of freedom,
which grew into the abundance of our lives today. Like those who planted the
shade trees sheltering us, we need to acknowledge that July 4th is much more than a time for picnics, fireworks, and
relaxation. We should verbalize the history
with our children, young family members, and remind ourselves why freedom is
important. Why we must never that
freedom as something to take for grant.
We celebrate American Independence Day on the Fourth
of July every year. We think of July 4,
1776, as a day that represents the Declaration of Independence and the birth of
the United States of America as an independent nation.
So what exactly happened on the Fourth of July?
According to Constitution Facts.com We think of July 4, 1776, as a day that
represents the Declaration of Independence and the birth of the
United States of America as an independent nation.
However,
July 4, 1776 wasn't the day that the Continental Congress decided to declare
independence (they did that on July
2, 1776).
It
wasn’t the day we started the American Revolution either (that had happened back in April 1775).
Moreover, it
wasn't the day Thomas Jefferson wrote the first draft of the Declaration of
Independence (that was in June 1776). Or the date on which the Declaration
was delivered to Great Britain (that didn't happen until November 1776). Or the
date it was signed (that was August 2, 1776).
So what REALLY did happen on July 4, 1776?
The Continental Congress approved the final
wording of the Declaration of Independence on July 4, 1776. They'd been working
on it for a couple of days after the draft was submitted on July 2nd and
finally agreed on all of the edits and changes.
July
4, 1776, became the date that was included on the Declaration of Independence, and the fancy handwritten copy that was signed
in August (the copy now displayed at the National Archives in Washington, D.C.)
It’s also the date that was printed on the Dunlap Broadsides, the original
printed copies of the Declaration that were circulated throughout the new
nation. Therefore, when people thought
of the Declaration of Independence, July 4, 1776 was the date they remembered.
As I sit in the shade of my mimosa tree on this
beautiful Southern California, I give thanks to those who founded our Nation,
and I honor those who made so many sacrifices.
Happy Reading,
Connie
Please stop by and visit the other authors
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Saturday, January 24, 2015
My Favorite Time and Place to Read? How About Writing Time? #Round Robin
Life keeps getting busier, and
finding time to complete daily tasks is difficult, but I always, always find
time to read.
This month’s question:
What is your favorite time and
place to read? How about writing time? Do you have to make time?
Do you have a ritual or is your plan helter-skelter? What's your method?
Do you have a ritual or is your plan helter-skelter? What's your method?
As a child it was hiding beneath
my covers with a flashlight long past my prescribed bedtime. Today, it more of a snatch of time here and
there. While preparing dinner (e-reader/ iPad /paperback
on the counter), 10:30 p.m. wrapped in a woven throw on the couch listening to
Slacker Radio on my iPad (when I should be sleeping), or with a grand-baby
snuggled in my lap. Reading is a
pleasure, an escape, a way to share stories with others.
I make time to read, I make time
to go to the gym, and I make time for family and friends. These day-to-day activities weave, in my
opinion, the fabric of a well-balanced and enjoyable life.
Writing Time—the second part of
today’s blog topic.
My method of writing?
I make it a practice to study the
master of successful fiction. Hemingway
never wrote a treatise of the art of writing fiction. He did, however, leave behind letters,
articles and books with opinions and advice on writing. Some of the best of those were assembled in
1984 by Larry W. Phillips into a book Ernest
Hemingway on Writing. While I do not rigidly follow these steps, I
always keep them in the back of my mind.
1: To get started, write one true sentence. One simple declarative sentence.
·
Charlene hadn’t told Rachel that she’d fixed her up
with a cowboy, much less Lynx Maddox, the “Wild Cat” of the rodeo circuit.
(Lynx, Rodeo Romance)
·
“You and Elvis have done a great job on this house,”
Meredith said as her older sister led the way downstairs toward the kitchen
where the tour began. “Sorry I couldn’t get over, until now, but I’ve been sort
of. . .well, busy.”
(Here Today, Zombie Tomorrow) Sassy & Fun Fantasy
Series.
·
Audralynn Maddox heard her own soft cry, but the pain exploding inside
her head made everything else surreal, distanced by the realization that
someone had made a mistake.
(Brede, Rodeo Romance Book 2)
My
exception: my YA historical novel is
told in the first person. Since the
novel focuses on the emotional and life altering events of a young girl, I used
historical facts and events to form the plot of my award-winning novel, Simple declarative
sentences are applied to the Prologue and Introduction. However, emotional impact was needed to make
the story ‘real’.
·
Prologue: The Governor of New Mexico decreed that all Indian children
over six be educated in the ways of the white man.
Indian commissioner Thomas Morgan said: It was cheaper to educate the
Indians than to kill them.
1880, Apacheria, Season of Ripened Berries
Isolated bands of colored clay on white limestone remained where the
sagebrush was stripped from Mother Earth by sudden storms and surface waters.
Desolate. Bleak. A land made of barren rocks and twisted paths that reached out
into the silence.
A world of hunger and hardship.
This is my world. I am Tanayia. I
was born thirteen winters ago. My people and I call ourselves “Nde” this means “The
People”. The white men call us Apache.
(Whisper upon the Water, Native American Series).
2: Always stop
for the day while you still know what will happen next. I find this to be a key for me. When I do not follow this step I find myself
flirting with writer’s block the next day.
3: Never think
about the story when you’re not working.
I carry this to an extreme, I do not talk about my work-in-progress. The only exception being when I have research
questions or trying to plot a continuing series.
4: When it’s
time to work again, always start by reading what you’ve written so far. The only problem, I am sooo tempted to
make revisions. For most part I beat
back the urge (with a stick, if necessary ;-).
Otherwise, I’d never progress beyond chapter one.
5: Don’t
describe an emotion–make it. Watch and
listen closely to external events, but to also notice any emotion stirred in
you, or others, by the events and then trace back and identify precisely what
it was that caused the emotion. If you can identify the concrete action or
sensation that caused the emotion and present it accurately and fully rounded
in your story, your readers should feel the same emotion. When I am uncertain as to whether I’ve conveyed
too little, or too much (insert: whiny), I ask my BF and fellow BWL writer,
Geeta Kakade. Geeta is the master of
writing emotion (just ask Debbie Macomber).
6: Use a
pencil. A mechanical
pencil, please (multiple selection of refill sizes and colors available online). I do not like to conduct an unproductive
search for a pencil sharpener—or heaven forbid, be reduced to whittling a semi-acceptable
point with my dull paring knife.
7: Be Brief. To quote Hemingway:
It wasn’t by accident that the
Gettysburg address was so short. The laws of prose writing are as immutable as
those of flight, of mathematics, of physics. Therefore, I revise ruthlessly,
use strong verbs, and avoid adverbs, and always, always step away from the
keyboard when it is time to type: The End.
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Connie Vines
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Saturday, November 29, 2014
Pinterest and the Tech Savvy Writer
Unfamiliar with Pinterest?
Pinterest is a social bookmarking site where users collect and share photos or images of their favorite events, interests, and hobbies. One of the fastest growing social media networks online, Pinterest is the third largest social networking site, behind only Facebook and Twitter.
What can Pinterest for you as a writer? Pinterest is the virtual "bulletin board". A bulletin board where readers gain a glimpse into you, the writer. In photos of your book covers, links to your blog/podcasts, or post your calendar of upcoming events,your readers get to know you. You can also save images to a board.
These images could include pictures of a place in the world where you have set previous novel(s) as well as your most recent novel, or works-in-progress.
You may also have private boards, for your eyes only. On these boards you can post inspiration for your work-in-progress. And pictures of items: clothes, scenery, houses, etc. –– that relate to your book. Refer to this board when you have an attack of writer's block, need inspiration, have lost your way along the slippery path to 'the end'.
Tech challenge? Here's how you get started:
Happy Pinning!
Pinterest is a social bookmarking site where users collect and share photos or images of their favorite events, interests, and hobbies. One of the fastest growing social media networks online, Pinterest is the third largest social networking site, behind only Facebook and Twitter.
What can Pinterest for you as a writer? Pinterest is the virtual "bulletin board". A bulletin board where readers gain a glimpse into you, the writer. In photos of your book covers, links to your blog/podcasts, or post your calendar of upcoming events,your readers get to know you. You can also save images to a board.
These images could include pictures of a place in the world where you have set previous novel(s) as well as your most recent novel, or works-in-progress.
You may also have private boards, for your eyes only. On these boards you can post inspiration for your work-in-progress. And pictures of items: clothes, scenery, houses, etc. –– that relate to your book. Refer to this board when you have an attack of writer's block, need inspiration, have lost your way along the slippery path to 'the end'.
Tech challenge? Here's how you get started:
- Register@ Pinterest.com. You will need a Facebook or Twitter account. (The site will import your friends from these social networks.)
- Receive an invitation to join by clicking the red button on Pinterest.com.
- Decide on a topic for each of your boards.
- Give it a name that is both descriptive and intriguing.
- Pictures for your boards can come from your personal collection, those found on the Internet, or those from someone else's board this is called a "re-pin". This 're-pin'links back to the person you borrowed the picture from. This sharing is what turns Pinterest into a social site, taking it to a higher level than that of online scrapbooking.
You can now link your pinned images to your Facebook page, fan page, website, blog, Twitter, publishers page, whatever social media sites you currently have.
Just as you would friend-users on Facebook, find people's boards to follow. Mention your Pinterest Board on a regular basis, once again linking it to other network sites.
Remember Pinterest does not host conversations. Visual images are the only connection. Make certain you updated your boards on a regular basis. This can be once a week or twice a month – – whatever fits into your schedule.
Pinterest is like any other social networking site. It involves a certain amount of effort and time to start up, commitment to keeping it up, and willingness to promote your latest release.
Looking for a Pinterest board to follow?
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